Hello Christopher Roy Denton ,

Congratulations on completing all of the June activities and qualifying for the July mini challenge in the Promptly Poetry Contest!

I popped over to your portfolio's folder to see if there was something I wanted to review for my part of the mini challenge and figured poem number one was a good place to start.

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
I enjoyed your poem and liked the humor you employed throughout.

You did a great job with the Promptly Poetry Challenge prompt for that week!

MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:
Your emoticons really added to the fun feel of this poem of yours. I like that not only did you not repeat any but each was perfect for the line it closed. Also you showed me a few I wasn't previously aware of.

My favorite line was: "Come Friday, I shout out a "Yay"!" I think almost all of us do! A universal feeling.

Though the Monday is pretty much universal too, it didn't make me as happy so didn't win as favorite. Though I loved the emoticon. Perfect.

Your poem is well written, flows nicely and evoked a variety of feelings in me as I read it.

It felt like I was living a week through your humorous eyes. Though I must admit to being shocked that no chocolate was mentioned.

I liked how you structured your poem.

I didn't notice any mistakes of any kind in your poem.

I hope next week brings you only joy!

CONCLUSION:
You wrote an enjoyable poem that I greatly enjoyed reading. Well done!

Thank you for sharing your fun poem with the writing.com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .