Hi S D Ballentyne , I found your writing ad random. Hopefully, this review will find you in good spirits.


On Title/Subject
Very good title and byline. As a critic of the man, I was immediately drawn into the story. I had to read this. Was it a follower of this American President or somebody with genuine doubts? I wanted to read to find out.


General impressions
Wow, what a great, great piece this is. I laughed out loud so many times I nearly forgot to write a review. I almost hear the man speak. You nailed him up to a tee. Very strong indeed. It's so funny!


Favorite Parts
Everything is really good. The tone, the way the intonations are, the repetition, the craziness, the content of his ramblings, I can actually hear him say those things for real, they resonate in my ear with his voice.


Suggestions
There was one thing, as an ESL writer from the Netherlands I didn't know the abbreviation PMT (something sexist I presume?).


Final thoughts
I am no fan of the man, sorry for that. If I see him on television, I turn down the volume or I switch channels. I really think he is very dangerous to the world and to the States. But this speech was so good! I loved reading it. Very well done!

Keep up the good work, enjoy writing!

WakeUpAndLive



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .