Hi Foxtrot Victor , I found your writing ad random. Hopefully, this review will find you in good spirits.


On Title/Subject
The title is well-chosen and covers its content. A lovely flash fiction about a cat in the portal meadows before entering heaven? Lovely choice.

General impressions
A great little tale, very sweet and innocent. Perfect for children. I think this would do fine in a book with colored drawings: a children's book.

Favorite Parts
“Relax, kitten… We don’t do that here,” Angel says in a soft, calming voice. “In this meadow, there is no hate, suffering, hunger, or thirst. Here, you’ll receive only love from the other pets that await their human spirits before crossing into heaven.”


A lovely sweet twist to the story. This is a good place for animals to be. A message that kids will understand perfectly.

Suggestions
If you are an artist yourself draw those pictures to accompany this tale. It makes a perfect children's book. Big letters, a sentence or paragraph per page...you know the drill. Otherwise, find a friend to do it.

Final thoughts
A sweet and lovely tale of a small kitten with a handicap. Thanks for sharing.

Keep up the good work, enjoy writing!

WakeUpAndLive



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