Hi Odessa Molinari , I found your writing ad random. Hopefully, this review will find you in good spirits.


On Title/Subject
Title and byline were okay, I thought nothing of it and began to read this flash fiction.


General impressions
Wow, what a lovely little tale this is. Taking care of my 86-year old stepmom at the moment in Corona time left me sympathizing with both your characters. It is a short and sweet tale and the ending was a great surprise. It nearly left me with tears in my eyes.


Favorite Parts
"Socks," Jason became hopeful, "No more socks." And here we go again. "And no aftershave. That stuff you got me stinks."

Great line, I envisioned Jason and his dad having this conversation in the middle of the livingroom in the nursing home.

Suggestions
No suggestions whatsoever. I find it wonderful how you manage to tell this rich en lovely tale with only 167 words.

Final thoughts
A lovely tale with bittersweet ending in minimum of words. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.

Keep up the good work, enjoy writing!

WakeUpAndLive



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