Hi Shadow Prowler-Spreading Love , I found your writing ad random. Hopefully, this review will find you in good spirits.


On Title/Subject
Funny title for a funny story. I only am in the loop to what you mean by "in the spirit of the month". I know nothing about farming or potatoes, perhaps August is Potato Month? Anyway, I wanted to read on.

General impressions
What a nice little anecdote this is. Super funny. You have an appealing writing style and your descriptions are vivid and well taken care of.

Favorite Parts
Then he tilts his head and says, "It's in the back of the truck, where do you want me to unload it?"

Unload it? I thought. I didn't even remember seeing anything in the truck. But then, the truck was taller than I was and I couldn't really see into it very well. I really wasn't sure how I was supposed to say to that. But he was looking at me expectantly, so I told him, "Anywhere that you want." I felt like it was a trick question of sorts.

It's the heart of the story.

Suggestions
No suggestions whatsoever. Grammar is fluent, style is very good. The pun is well developed. But whatever happened to the cowboy? Perhaps you could finish with the answer to that question? Just the one line in addition?

Final thoughts
A lovely story that actually happened. Non-fiction can be as far-fetched as fiction can be. Loved the story, thanks for sharing.

Keep up the good work, enjoy writing!

WakeUpAndLive



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .