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Given: Aug 18, 2020 at 1:19pm
Length: 530 Characters |
525 w/o WritingML
Hi there, I'm Beacon and I'm from "The WDC Angel Army" and am going to review your item. I hope the comments or suggestions will help you.
When I read you're story, I think it's a good one but there's a minor thing, the dialogue has a paragraph spaced so you keep you're dialogue together. I think that's one of the hardest things to do is keep the dialogue together. All in all, keep on writing and let me know if I can be further assistance like reviewing your work.
Thank you for letting me review your work and keep writing.
Beacon
You responded to this review 08/19/2020 @ 12:30am EDT
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