Hi Mr. Midnight , I found your writing at your request. Hopefully, this review will find you in good spirits.


On Title/Subject
A good title that covers its content. Again interesting developments, introducing another character. Want to know the significance.

General impressions
The aftermath of the explosion. Third-party. Who's he? Have to wait and find out.

Favorite Parts
"What about Mr. Takahashi? Is he alright?"
Dr. Jefferson's face went from 'witty' to 'I just ate a sour lemon while watching a man's skin melt.' "I'm afraid not. He suffered quite a bit more from the malfunction. He's being treated in isolation now, in a specialized area. That's all I can tell you."
"Jeez ... is he okay?"

Funny.

Suggestions
No suggestions. The adventure is taking an interesting turn for the worse.

Final thoughts
Good chapter. Am looking forward to reading the rest.

Keep up the good work, enjoy writing!

WakeUpAndLive



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