Hi Mr. Midnight , I found your writing at your request. Hopefully, this review will find you in good spirits.


On Title/Subject
A good title that covers its content. Interesting chapter full of "spy-stuff", lol.

General impressions
I loved the interaction between Peter and the girl and the two grey suits in the surveillance car. Good dialogs.

Favorite Parts
The whole first bit where Peter is preparing breakfast in between his conversation with the girl. Very well done, real-life feel to it.

Suggestions
No suggestions whatsoever. Grammar impeccable, flow okay.

Final thoughts
Good and interesting chapter. I missed the cat, lol. Thanks for sharing.

Keep up the good work, enjoy writing!

WakeUpAndLive



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