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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, J.L. O'Dell! I am reviewing this because I am part of "I Write in 2020" . *Smile*


*Quill* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.


What I Liked

         *Bullet* I can definitely connect to this as I'm sure others will, too. *Smile*
         *Bullet* I like how you centered it, as it works well 'visually' with the second line: Go left or right.
         *Bullet* You've managed 24 syllables exactly without it feeling forced at all.
         *Bullet* I always like learning a new word! Now if I can only remember it. *Laugh*
         *Bullet* Nicely written with good flow. Message is clear.


Suggestions to Consider

         *Bullet* I have absolutely nothing to suggest. This is a clear, crisp piece!


Final Thoughts

         I often wander aimlessly about when trying to make little decisions, putting way too much time into thought. *Laugh* I, too, am juberous!

Best of luck in the contest!


Have a great day and...*Quill*
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !
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