Hi Mr. Midnight , I found your writing at your request. Hopefully, this review will find you in good spirits.

On Title/Subject
Another title that suits fine but is not great. Although it fits the content perhaps something more appropriate is better?

General impressions
I was afraid of another chapter with only violence but that was not the case, fortunately. I loved the variety in this one. Action, description, the cat, the code, the flight upstairs, and finally into Merc's arms. A lot happened in this part of the story.

Favorite Parts
Every time the cat popped out its little head and moved or purred, I melted. A good counterpart of the action and mayhem.

Suggestions
Grammar impeccable, good flow and pace, different action points. Interesting.

Final thoughts
Another well-thought chapter. We finally get to meet Merc. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Keep up the good work, enjoy writing!

WakeUpAndLive



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