Hello Beholden ,

I'm reading the "revel" entries to the twenty syllable version of the "24 Syllables" poetry contest and I enjoyed your poem so I thought I'd give you a "happy 20th anniversary to WDC" review!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
I enjoyed your poem and loved your clever rhyming.

You wrote a fun poem with snappy rhyming and that made me smile.

MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Your poem is perfectly timed for the writing.com 20th anniversary celebrations!

Your rhyming was fantastic and I loved that you not only had rhyming in all the end lines but also added a bonus in-line rhyme on the first line.

Your poem is well written, flows nicely and evoked the image of a brave reveler about to celebrate in some wild ways.

My favorite line was: "dodge the dangers sev’ral -" because you even worked alliteration into this poetic-device-heavy yet super-short poem.

Your syllable count is perfect.

You did a great job in making the "revel" prompt word stand out.

Your poem almost felt like a cheer.

I liked how you structured your poem.

I didn't notice any mistakes of any kind in your poem.


CONCLUSION:
You wrote a fun, cheerful poem that I enjoyed. Well done!

Thank you for sharing your celebratory poem with the writing.com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler


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