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 David's newbie poem.  [E]
This is a brief discription. It's quick sweet and to the point.
by Davidthetrickstar
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Wow! what a fantastic poem "David's newbie poem." is! This is written by the poet Davidthetrickstar. Though the poet is a newbie poet, in state of that, he shows tremendous maturity in real sense.
The poet uses only seventeen syllables like Japanese Tanka but he used only a single line whereas a Japanese Tanka has three lines. The intensity is the same.
Here, the poet very prominently tells us how can he maintains this stink relationship. The thinking about this relationship is possible, anymore! This is spoken very straight and nice manner. If you read the poem carefully, you will find a rhythm.
Anyway, this is written very carefully. Keep writing.


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