I didn't (now) what she was asking of me.

Really good story. Your descriptions of your characters were clear, although I mean the ones you described. I am assuming that the story, the action is more important for the effect. I particulary liked Shirley, and the fact that the female porn star were similar. The action was creative. The use of the wine glass was espescially creative. Interestingly I got color senses while reading this story; rather enhancing the enjoyment.

I didn't find any grammatical catastrophies, and the spelling was good too. Good story.

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