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 You Never Walk Alone  [E]
A poem to remind you that you are not alone in whatever you do.
by Aubrey's Play
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. I am reviewing this poem for the Angel Army Newbie Challenge SEP 2020.

*Reading* THE POEM

A heartfelt, inspirational poem that reminds the reader that you are never alone.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked the word play; it deepened the expression of the poem. There was a rhythmic flow that I experienced when I read the poem.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is free form poem. The 1st and 3rd stanza of each line stanza rythmed.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling mistakes. Punctuation was light, but appropriate. The poem is easy to read.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked the opening line: "You are not alone, you never walk alone." Right away it sets a tone for the poem which is hopeful and upbeat.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

I liked how the poem came full circle using a nature motif. The wind offers whispers for us -- we cannot be afraid to listen. Great expression!

Reviewed by StephB for the the Angel Army

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