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Given: Sep 7, 2020 at 12:21pm
Length: 1,145 Characters |
1,086 w/o WritingML
My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. I am reviewing this poem for the Angel Army Newbie Challenge SEP 2020.
THE POEM
A heartfelt, inspirational poem that reminds the reader that you are never alone.
WHAT I LIKED
I liked the word play; it deepened the expression of the poem. There was a rhythmic flow that I experienced when I read the poem.
STRUCTURE
This is free form poem. The 1st and 3rd stanza of each line stanza rythmed.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling mistakes. Punctuation was light, but appropriate. The poem is easy to read.
DESCRIPTIONS
I liked the opening line: "You are not alone, you never walk alone." Right away it sets a tone for the poem which is hopeful and upbeat.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
I liked how the poem came full circle using a nature motif. The wind offers whispers for us -- we cannot be afraid to listen. Great expression!
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