My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. I am reviewing this poem for the Angel Army Newbie Challenge SEP 2020.

THE POEM

The night wraps the author in a warm embrace and yet, is it as warm as it implies? The author explores this question.

WHAT I LIKED

I liked the word play; it deepened the expression of the poem.

STRUCTURE

This is free form poem. There were some strategic rhymes, but no set patterns.

MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling mistakes. I might suggest a light edit for punctuation/capitalization as I think it will assist the flow in which the reader reads the poem. I am curious about the capitalization and lack of capitalization of "i" in the poem. I think the lower case "i" would be served by stronger punctuation. The poem is easy to read.

DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "The moon is smiling, the sky is clear."

PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

Suggestions as mentioned above. Good expression.