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 Stroke is an Intruder  [E]
It is about my late husband who had a major stroke.
by Noreen Snyder
Review by Cubby
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, Noreen Snyder! I discovered this piece on the Newbies Work List. I also noticed you are new to WDC! Welcome! I hope you are enjoying the site! If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. *Smile*

*Quill* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

What I Liked

         *Bullet* I liked that this piece speaks directly to the stroke. You did a great job with that!
         *Bullet* My favorite lines are:

So why-- Why my man?
Just bring him back to me
like he was

         *Bullet* Everything flows very nicely. Good job!


Suggestions to Consider

         *Bullet* I don't have any suggestions!


Final Thoughts

         I've never read a poem where the narrator speaks to a stroke who has damaged her husband's body. I'm sorry to hear about the whole experience. You did a great job writing this poem. I look forward to reading more from you in the near future. Hope you are enjoy our community! It's a great place to be. *Smile*


Have a great day and...*Quill*
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