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 Greetings, lloth5454! I discovered this piece on the Newbies Work List page. I also noticed you have been a member of WDC for about two weeks now. Welcome! I hope you are enjoying the site! If you have any questions, please feel free to ask.  First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.What I Liked  This reminds me of my daughter's job! She works with challenged children at a public elementary school and often shares similar stories with me. It takes a special person to work with special kids and I commend you! You've done a great job telling us of this experience! It's clear, easy to follow, includes humor and is definitely visual!  Favorite line: He does it with such a face of disgust that it reminds me of someone disposing a dead mouse from a mousetrap.  Great comparison! I got a kick out of all your universal references. And I wasn't too surprised when you added But autism doesn’t really hold tight with the ‘universal norms’. This is a wonderful piece! I absolutely love how you end it, too. Suggestions to Consider Paragraph 5: teachers chair  teacher's chair Paragraph 5: Worse. The chair is on wheels! Worse? The chair is on wheels! or Even worse, the chair is on wheels! Final Thoughts You are a wonderful storyteller! I'm sure you and my daughter would have many stories to share. I enjoyed this very much and I look forward to reading more from you in the near future! Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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