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 Greetings, Violet! I don't remember where I found this treasure, but I had it saved in order to review it. The title and its summary drew me in immediately!  First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.What I Liked   I want more!  Please!!! I didn't miss a word! I hung on to each and every one. I absolutely loved the idea of a hotel run by ghosts whose guests were ghosts, too. The narrator--Tatiana--works as a receptionist at the hotel and has her own room on the third floor. The guests are wealthy, poor, young, old, intelligent, funny, strange, and a variety of other adjectives I couldn’t possibly think of all at once. One thing they all have in common though, is that they are no longer alive. And now Tatiana has become bored, longing for something to break up the monotony. I love how you left me hanging... and that something happened to walk through the door last night.Suggestions to Consider I have no suggestions as far as corrections go. Otherwise, please keep going with this story... I'm lovin' it!Final Thoughts You definitely have what it takes to be an author, as far as luring, hooking, and grabbing a reader's attention! I haven't checked in your port yet to see if you've written a 2nd chapter, but I will. Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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