With so many items uploaded to this site every day, it can sometimes be hard for reviewers to find something they want to read. To bring more people to your item, adding appropriate genres is really important. Many people search the site for genres they are interested in, so giving your item three specific genres will entice more people to click on your item. For this piece, you might consider "Personal," "Family," "Writing," or maybe "Death."

Then, once someone has opened your piece, formatting and readability are key to keep them from clicking away. I recommend increasing the font size from the standard size 3 to a size 4, or even size 5 depending on the length of the piece and the space it takes up on the page. Increasing the font size and even adding a font color will bring your piece to life and help it stand out from the rest of the wording on the site. You can read more about how to enhance your text with WritingML at this link: "Effective Formatting" 

If you're looking for more tips and tricks for drawing more readers and earning more reviews, check this out: "Seeking Reviews"