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 Summertime Is Precious   [E]
Living in Northeastern USA has some of us treasuring warmer seasons.
by Jabberwb
Review by Emily
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Jabberwb ! I saw you were new here so I wanted to come say hello! Welcome to Writing.Com! *Quill*

*StarO* Oh gosh, this is such a lovely piece! It flows easily off my tongue when I read it aloud and presents such a nice picture of summertime! *Sun* Your rhyme scheme is beautiful as well. *ThumbsUpL* My favorite stanza is the third about the geese and goslings - sweet!

*StarG* I only noticed a few tiny edits you might consider - In line 3, I believe the word its should not have an apostrophe. And it looks like there is an extra line space between the third and fourth stanzas. Both very minor edits *Bigsmile*

*Staro* I like to share some tips about enhancing the formatting and readability for your piece because these are key to keep readers from clicking away too soon. I recommend increasing the font size of poems from the standard size 3 to a size 4, or even size 5 depending on the length of the piece and the space it takes up on the page. Increasing the font size and even adding a font color will bring your piece to life and help it stand out from the rest of the wording on the site. Centering a poem like this would also help make it stand out a bit more *Ha* You can read more about how to enhance your text with WritingML at this link: "Effective Formatting" 

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*StarG* Don't hesitate to let me know if there is anything I can help you with! Again, welcome to Writing.Com! *Reading*

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Emily

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