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 You'll always love me yesterday  [E]
When you hope that he'll stay, but all along there was yesterday.
by Hera
Review by Emily
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Hera ! I saw you were new here and wanted to stop by to say hello! Welcome to Writing.Com *Cool* *Quill*

*StarO* Oh wow, I love this! Very strong emotions in so few lines - well done! My favorite lines are the third and fourth because they paint such a beautiful picture. I also love the rhyme *Smile* Your flow of this piece is spot on and the line length is great to keep the reader interested. I also have to complement you on the theme of this piece - very innovative and quite unique! Cherishing the love that once was - holding on to the love of yesterday. *ThumbsUpL*

*StarG* With so many items uploaded to this site every day, it can sometimes be hard for reviewers to find something they want to read. To bring more people to your item, adding appropriate genres is really important. Many people search the site for genres they are interested in, so giving your item three specific genres will entice more people to click on your item. I think in your case, instead of "Other" you might use "Emotional" or "Personal?" Those are less frequently used than "Other" and also describe your poem better.

*Staro* I also think with a short poem like this that an increase in the font size would help with the readability. I recommend increasing the font size from the standard size 3 to a size 4, or even size 5 depending on the length of the piece and the space it takes up on the page. Increasing the font size and even adding a font color will bring your piece to life and help it stand out from the rest of the wording on the site. You can read more about how to enhance your text with WritingML at this link: "Effective Formatting" 

*StarG* Don't hesitate to let me know if there is anything I can help you with! Again, welcome to Writing.Com! *Reading*

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Emily

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