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 Love Me  [E]
Something short and sweet on how to love me
by Elexis LaFay
Review of Love Me  
Review by Emily
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Elexis LaFay ! Welcome to Writing.Com! I saw you were new here, so I wanted to pop in and read something! *Reading* *Cool*

*StarO* You're right - this is a sweet little poem about being in love and asking the other person to love you back, no matter what. I found it easy to read and it left me feeling good - warm and fuzzies *Smile* You do a good job with punctuation in this piece as well as using repetition to enhance your meaning, but it does feel a little like Dr. Seuss. I'm not sure if you meant it that way, but that's the impression I got while reading. I don't think it's a bad thing either! The poem is whimsical and has a happy tone, so the child-like repetition just added to the theme.

*StarG* My suggested edits for you are related to formatting and readability. I recommend increasing the font size from the standard size 3 to a size 4, or even size 5 depending on the length of the piece and the space it takes up on the page. Increasing the font size and even adding a font color will bring your piece to life and help it stand out from the rest of the wording on the site. This is important to keep potential readers from clicking away once they open your item.

*Staro* Don't hesitate to let me know if there is anything I can help you with! Again, welcome to Writing.Com! *Reading*

Take care,
Emily

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