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Hi Nomatika ! I found your piece by clicking "Read and Review." Welcome to Writing.Com! *Quill*

*StarO* This piece seems to be a study of the setting of a potential future story. It describes the base of operations for the character Ms. Crips. I like the details you have given in this about the planet's weather and how the storms and lightening are harvested in the tower - very clever idea! You do a good job describing what the setting looks like and the characters, including the robots, that inhabit the world you've created. I'd be interested to see the story that you build in this world!

*StarG* Thanks for sharing your setting description! Don't hesitate to let me know if there is anything I can help you with! Again, welcome to Writing.Com! *Reading*

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