My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. I am reviewing this poem for the Angel Army Review Challenge SEP 2020.

THE POEM

The poem dealt was a nightmare involving lightning striking all around -- will it get me?

WHAT I LIKED

I liked the word play; it deepened the expression of the poem. I pictured someone like me, helpless, in the dark, trying to avoid the lightning.

STRUCTURE

This is free form poem. There were some strategic rhymes in the last sentences of each stanza.

MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read.

DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "caught in the wind, round and round it's swirling."

PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

I liked the use of short, concise words to increase in the urgency in the tone of the poem. I have no suggestions for improvement.