My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. I am reviewing this item for the Angel Army Review Challenge SEP 2020.

THE POEM

The poem takes a look at a tree and changes they must endure.

WHAT I LIKED

I liked the word play; it deepened the expression of the poem. There was a rhythmic flow that I experienced when I read the poem. I liked how "If I was a tree" was repeated.

STRUCTURE

This is free form poem. There were some strategic rhymes, but no set patterns.

MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read. The punctuation accents the flow of the poem.

DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "if I were a tree, fear should not be
losing my leaves, being seen to my core." Nice visual here.

PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

I like how the poem challenges the reader to think about nature around them.. I have no suggestions for improvement. Great expression.