My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. I am reviewing this poem for the Angel Army Review Challenge SEP 2020.

THE POEM

The poem told the story of Christmas and the visit of the three wise men.

WHAT I LIKED

I liked the story the poem told. It was upbeat and full of hope.

STRUCTURE

This is free form poem. There was an AABB rythme scheme.

MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read. Good use of WDC ML using red and green colors to give the poem an accented feel of Christmas.

DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "the child lay nestled in a bed of straw.." Nice visual here.

PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

Great expression. A heartwarming poem. I have no suggestions for improvement.