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Review of Determination  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. I am reviewing this poem for the Angel Army Review Challenge SEP 2020.

*Reading* THE POEM

The poem tells a story of a boy who braves the ocean waves.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

The poem is light-hearted, easy to follow along, and at the end you "felt" the same determination the young boy did. Well done!

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is free form poem.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "clad in a life jacket, a fit nice and snug..."

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

A very endearing read and evokes emotion well. I have no suggestions for improvement.

Reviewed by StephB for the the Angel Army

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