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Creationism 101  [E]
Origin of life .. in God's mind.
by bob county
Review of Creationism 101  
Review by Zhen
Rated: E | (4.0)
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General Comments

You wrote a short story about the debate about evolution.

Grammar and spelling are good and mostly don't distract me.
Genres are well-chosen.

I found at the end of the story, when you wrote "and left there statements", you meant their.

Story Comments

Are the characters engaging?

Yes, Muzzy is a funny prof.

Is there enough conflict? Is the plot compelling?

It's okay.

Does the action rise to a climax?

Yes.

Does the dialogue sound natural and does it advance the plot?

Yes. Good job having an event happen that few would believe.

Is the setting clear in the reader's mind?

Yes.

Write on! *BigSmile*

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