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Rated: E | (5.0)
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this poem is full of encouraging remarks outlining the secret of life. I personally can't refute any of them, I might add a line about chocolate somewhere in there. It isn't really a flaw that the author left it out, but come on... you can't leave out one of life's greatest secrets.

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