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The Active Eye  [E]
Poetry based on present state of feeling
by Tina M. Courtney
Review of The Active Eye  
Review by jaya
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Tina

I picked this poem from your poetry folder and it is my pleasure to review it for your WDC Account Anniversary. Congratulations and have a lovely day!

You talk about a quality hush, which is difficult to come by. We can't hush nature, the breeze, the rustle of leaves or the sounds of creatures or the songs of birds.
"Hush, crow.
Hush, talkative clouds."

Your ear is obviously fine tuned. You create that scintillating silence in your mind and then a blissful concentration follows.
"Hush soul, let sun kiss my lips again."

Images of nature are found well grounded in imagination. Lines and line lengths agree with the thoughts displayed in the free style mode of the poem.

It flows well.

Write on!
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