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Hi Nishant,
This is a fantastic article. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the article is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You introduce the topic by outlining the challenges that advancing technology can pose. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the article. They will read to the last word. You have written about the advantages of Apple's Reality Kit. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible to the reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the article tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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