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Hi Thoughjobs-USA,
This is a wonderful piece. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of piece. I am a business owner and was very interested in your topic. I began to read right away to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written how your company can help business owners with their social media marketing. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as person as well as a writer.. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1) You will be able to communicate with your social media manager daily via email or schedule a call at a time that is convenient for the both of us.?-The question is not necessary here.

You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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