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 My Vixen  [13+]
A short poem about the experience between two true soul mates.
by Ryan Darling
Review of My Vixen  
Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a semi-erotic poem about two people in love sharing a bed of wedded bliss. Or at least I hope it is wedded bliss. As a preacher I am assuming so. *BigSmile*



Your spelling and grammar: Looked goood to me.

What I liked most: I liked the love shown in this one.

What I liked least: It was more of a paragraph than a poem. It expressed well though and that was the main thing.

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