I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This was a poem written to a little brother in a dark time of his life. I hope he came through it unscathed. I have several little brothers, one now deceased from an industrial accident. I would take a bullet for any of them so I know what you mean.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me except for the last line. I think you meant to type "forever" and you typed "frever" instead.

What I liked most: I liked the love you have for your little brother. It reminds me of what family is all about. As my parents died my family and drifted apart.

What I liked least: The format. I prefer meter.

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