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 Rhythm and Hope: A Treasured Feel  [E]
Turning the tide of morning - a poem.
by Tim Chiu
Review by Spring in my Sox
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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It has beautiful images and interesting word choices. It doesn't have a clear form. The images and language don't flow together easily in my head. They seem pretty unconnected. The poem appears to be reaching for something. I am not sure it reaches that target.
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