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 Short Christmas Tune  [E]
A short satirical poem loosely for the chorus music of Jingle Bells
by SunWriter
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Nicely written details and a good word flow. This is cute. Seems like Santa's eleves are celebrating and I like the rhyme pattern and the bounce in this. Looks like you spent time with this. Creative with a good style. Good presentation and I enjoyed reading this. Always:Megan
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