Hi LOTR98,
This is a fantastic story. The tone is tinged with satisfaction. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering what will come of the photo the photographer is about to take. They will read to the last word to find out. The plot is straight forward and moves along logically. In the story, a photographer finds the perfect scene for a photo he wants to take. The story is narrative as opposed to conflict based. This rare in literature and very interesting. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The story concentrates on the photographer, and they come across as a real person. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. You use strong imagery to put your reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.