Hi Anonominous,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of confusion and sorrow. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone wondering what their relationship could have become had it lasted. I am wondering if the speaker and their former partner will speak and work out their problems. I read to the last word to find out. I loved this poem. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.