Hello intuey GoT Survivor!

Happy writing.com anniversary month! I popped over to your port to see what I might review for you and this poem's picture caught my eye. Then I noticed the lovely title and description and decided to give it a read.


INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
I enjoyed your poem and loved your positive suggestions that you conveyed throughout it.

You wrote a nice inspirational poem that made me smile.

MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Your poem is perfectly timed all the craziness going on in our world. We definitely need more people "helping good and love advance."

Your form and rhyming look good. I don't know if I've read a Freslighe form poem before and I'm pretty sure I've never written one but I'm glad I read yours.

Your poem is well written, flows nicely and evoked the image of a better world in the future, if only more people would do the right things.

My favorite line was: "Bring back hope once discarded" because we definitely need to do that and I liked the alliteration in the first two words.

I liked how you structured your poem.

I didn't notice any mistakes of any kind in your poem.


CONCLUSION:
You wrote a heartfelt inspirational poem that I enjoyed. Well done!

Thank you for sharing your philosophical poem with the writing.com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler



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