Hi Hank,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about a when you met a fascinating woman and shared a wonderful time with her. I loved the insight I got into your life and relationships. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
You responded to this review 02/12/2021 @ 3:27am EST
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