Hello Sharmelle's Expressions

I popped over to your port to see what I might review for you and this poem's title caught my eye, and decided to give it a read.


INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
I enjoyed your poem and all of the ocean, mystery and romance themes.

You wrote a lovely nature/emotional poem that made me smile.

MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

I liked the picture that accompanied your poem. It conveyed both the ocean theme and a bit of mystery.

Your poem also contained a story, which made it extra interesting.

Your poem is well written, flows nicely and evoked the images of moonlit romance by the sea as I read it.

My favorite line was: "Waves coming ashore like heaven" because it just spoke to me. I loved it.

I liked how you structured your poem. The four-line stanzas felt just right.


CONCLUSION:
You wrote a heartfelt poem that I enjoyed. Well done!

Thank you for sharing your romantic nature poem with the writing.com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler



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