Hello StellarStories

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INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
I enjoyed your poem and loved your poem's ending.

You wrote an inspirational poem that made me smile.


MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Your poem is very relatable and I especially love the strength of character portrayed at the end.

Your poem is well written, flows nicely and evoked clear images in my mind as I read it and a strong emotion in my heart at the end.

My favorite line was: "And invite them to share in your warmth." It was the perfect ending to your poem.

I liked how you structured your poem.

I didn't notice any mistakes of any kind in your poem.

It does take courage to endure all that you describe in the first stanza. And great strength of character to respond in the way of the second stanza. Great job.


CONCLUSION:
You wrote a strong inspirational poem that I enjoyed. Well done!

Thank you for sharing your tribute poem with the writing.com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler



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