Angel Army Anniversary review:




Hello fyn

Happy writing.com anniversary month! I popped over to your port to see what I might review for you and this poem's title caught my eye and I decided to give it a read.


INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
I greatly enjoyed your poem and loved seeing Montmartre through your poetic eyes.

You wrote a beautiful poem that transported me into the journey you portrayed.


MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

I'm not sure if this is a real or imagined trip but it's excellent either way. I've always wanted to visit Paris (and more of France) but as it's not looking likely, your poetic journey let me do it in my mind. Thank you!

Free verse is perfect for this travel poem of yours and I liked the occasional rhyming too.

Your poem is well written, flows nicely and evoked many images of a trip to Montmartre.

My favorite line was: "and I shall show you a world beyond your dreams" because it felt so enticing.

I loved the ending and the point of the ending too.

I liked how you structured your poem.

I didn't notice any mistakes of any kind in your poem.

In the spirit of helpfulness, I'd love to offer a suggestion for improvement, but I can't think of anything. This is a fantastic poem.

CONCLUSION:
You wrote a beautiful travel poem that I enjoyed. Well done!

Thank you for sharing your lovely poem with the writing.com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler



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