Hi feyer st. clair,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is intense and filled with interest and attraction. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who is attracted to someone who they are working with and trying not to show it. I am wondering if these two people enjoyed a relationship. I read to the last word to find out. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.