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I Write - Decade Edition - Roaring 20's  [E]
Poems and prose for various contests over the course of the decade.
by 💙 Carly
         Review for entry/chapter: "Spring Awakens " 
Review by Cubby
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Greetings, 💙 Carly! I am reviewing this because I am part of "CLOSED: Merit Badges for Fun Raffle " . *Smile*

*Quill* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.


What I Liked

         *Bullet* I love poetry about spring, rebirth, new beginnings! *Heartg* All the buds and green grass and yes, even dandelions, boost me up to no end! *Delight*
         *Bullet* I enjoyed the visuals in this piece and my heart in happy it is spring! Last year, we were cheated out of our spring here in Michigan. It was miserable and on top of that, the virus emerged. So far, this spring is lovely! Perhaps it's time for the virus to exit! *Wink*

Suggestions to Consider

         *Bullet* I have nothing to suggest for improvement! *Smile*

Favorites: I loved the following phrases!

dappled heads
pops of brightness
tickle a smile

Final Thoughts

         Thank you for sharing this refreshing poem and lifting my spirits! *Hug*


Have a great day and...*Quill*
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !
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