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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I'm reviewing this for "CLOSED: Merit Badges for Fun Raffle "  because your post was just before mine. I'm not a professional reviewer and these are only my opinions. Take what you find useful. Ignore the rest. All comments are given with love and respect for you and your writing. *Smile*

*CheckB* My overall impression and emotional impact: The first stanza establishes the main character, the rhythm, plot, and the theme of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace.


*CheckO* Form, format, rhyme and meter: This poem has the rhythm of a prose poems, which flows easily from stanza to stanza.


*CheckY* Grammar, spelling and mechanics: I found no technical problems.


*CheckR* Suggestions for improvement: I have no suggestions for improvement.


*CheckG* My favorite parts: The last stanza is my favorite because it climaxed the plot and made me smile.


Thank you so much for sharing your writing! It was a pleasure to review and I hope you find my comments helpful. Remember, they are only my opinion. You're the writer and know what's best for you. *Wink*

Good luck with the rest of "CLOSED: Merit Badges for Fun Raffle " ! *Shamrock* You got this! You can do it! I believe in you! *Hug*


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