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Ides of March  [E]
The Sequel to March 1st, 2056.
by LorenIsOneOfMyNames
Review of Ides of March  
Review by Past Member 'stolenthrones'
Rated: E | (4.0)
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Totally loooove this!

I noticed soon after Daniel saves her you say "I stay still,I scared stiff." did you mean, "I stay still, scared stiff."

That's all I saw. Thank you for the awesome smooth read. I soooo hope you are planning to write more. Amazing job
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