Hello Rakkit

It is my pleasure to review your piece today "The masquerade".

Disclaimer:

I will give you my thoughts, pointers, corrections if needed, and some advice. These are
only my opinions. Feel free to use what you find helpful, and please disregard the rest,
for I'm not an expert reviewer.

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Rhythm & Flow:

I found the rhythm and flow of your poem quite interesting. The way you presented it is awesome and unique! Well done.

Imagery & Emotions:

I love how this poem is good at using imagery spreading. The different fonts which you used everywhere is what that made me read this poem.

Mistakes:

There are no mistakes. Plus I liked that you ended each stanza with same line. I guess it is called refrain.

My favorite line is:

"The blade against the skin, writes a soul’s desire"

Keep Writing!
Regards,
Lurie Park



"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .