Hi KrystalGayle,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is filled with fear. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about how timid and nervous you were about your writing. I spent weeks on this site completely intimidated by the multitude of talented people that surrounded me. I started to review other people's work, and I felt better. They realized they probably struggled just like I did. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.