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Review #4613286
Viewing a review of:
Snow's Writing for 2019, 2020, & Beyond  [13+]
This book holds the items for the contest I enter in 2019, 2020, and beyond.
by Prosperous Snow celebrating
         Review for entry/chapter: "Where Have You Been" 
Review by Cubby
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Greetings, Prosperous Snow celebrating! I am reviewing this because I am part of "CLOSED: Merit Badges for Fun Raffle " . *Smile*

*Quill* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.


What I Liked

         *Bullet* Great rhyming! It's not always easy rhyming one word six times without it sounding forced. You did great! *Smile*
         *Bullet* You managed to grasp my curiosity about where this person spends their daylight hours. I feel like this could be a riddle.
         *Bullet* You followed the rules to the contest perfectly. *Smile*


Suggestions to Consider

         *Bullet* I have no suggestions


Final Thoughts

         I can't help but wonder what the answer is. *Laugh*

Best of luck in the contest, Neva!


Have a great day and...*Quill*
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !
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